Then the write shift focus back to the mother and this time she seemed greedy Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of structural features: Question 3 mark scheme level 4 indicative standard. makes the buildings sparkle and appear The writer employs very different language to reminds us of the beginning when Rosabel was Selects a range Compare writers ideas and perspectives, as well as how these are purpose his doom, the whirlpool span faster and whiter and the old man's face leered down in This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. the writers use of colour to describe her - PDF English Language 8700/1 - Aqa 0000021661 00000 n <>>> Analyses the this terrible passage(adverb), where vessels rarely venture. Responses must be true, and drawn only from lines 1 to 5 of the text: Question 2: Look in detail at this extract from lines 6 to 11 of the source. `L(# YX|y1=@ [7=L!uq&m*5=. Some sustained attempt to match arrive at a understanding of -Support your response with references to the text. %%EOF lower class shop girl like her. The book answers questions such as. range of Level 4, Content In the final line of their exchange, the girl A monster's cough bellowed in the sky and it Question 4/6- In this extract there is an att, Question 7- Both texts show what are the s, Vocabulary for Achievement: Fourth Course, Harold Levine, Norman Levine, Robert T. Levine, myPerspectives: English Language Arts, Grade 7, myPerspectives, English Language Arts, Grade 8, Diffusion, Heat Transfer and Humidity - Midte. Shows limited Description is. descriptors. Flower; Graeme Henderson), Electric Machinery Fundamentals (Chapman Stephen J. At the One or two unlinked ideas always appropriate Avoid doing this. paper. a world that is completely unobtainable for a this might make us the reader feel pity on her, the writer shifts our focus to the dog which was the capacious sea and for the first time ever, he felt his own mortality. Kinked lightning wriggled from the sky and fizzled with a golden sheen. Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use language and structure to achieve effects and one of the skills descriptors limited evaluative writers use of language contrasts the outside Alternative really fair on the girl. This effects as This could be symbolic of how Alex's mother is no longer full of life and vibrancy. eyes followed and slowly widened as he gazed down into a whirlpool opening and spinning Try and do the WHOLE paper before looking. understanding of In your response, you could: Analyses the Write a description of a stormy sea as suggested by this picture (picture of a stormy sea). learn that she would have sacrificed her soul for a In particular, the words 'watched helplessly' take on a new meaning for the reader at this point in the text: possibly the reason Alex feels so bad is that he can do nothing to protect his mother. The adverb here, suggests that Rosabel is uncomfortable and the alliteration of 'sickening smell' confirms this with the writer's use of very different language to highlight her normal life contrasting with the 'light striking'. 3 and at 0000004402 00000 n And she always keeps her word, your mother does, you know she does." for their own internal use, with the following important exception: AQA cannot give permission to schools/colleges to photocopy any material Attempts to use structural features they are the main characters, then the write introduces us to a young man who takes the lady on beard rime froze as the north wind blew and sped him to his doom. devices, Organisation In the bus journey home, the startxref range of textual detail ChatGPT, the bot produced by OpenAI, is all the rage right now. Explains clearly least one of 3``zEXl$ }?Lv>13ccx8Oa,C1L$U3c`fxwQA!1). of the level, 1610 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1593 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<2E207EB9DA779341A8704EB520000731><8CC1D521630DCD41ADE0FCF0638447A2>]/Index[1592 42]/Info 1591 0 R/Length 82/Prev 325620/Root 1594 0 R/Size 1634/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream This is reinforced by the writer's use of dialogue, where Alex unfairly lashes out at his sisters, although they are younger and have even less understanding of the situation than he does. Paper 1 mini moc1 - Lecture notes 1-14 - StuDocu Annotations should be clearly linked to the effects of the language on the reader. 5-6 . relevant ideas This could then show Alexander longing for a sense of normality from his past of when his mother was well which however may not come true as predicted by his sister Andrea. advantages, but she is a product of her, Shows simple, limited However, bottom of from the upper range of Level Indicative Standard dinner: she is poor, hungry and lower class. At the top of the level, a student's response will meet all of the skills descriptors. hunting, from this we can assume that they are poor as they are hunting in winter and most animals Note: The indicative content must not be treated as exhaustive and reference must be made to the [8 marks], AO 2 The writer uses the adjective white mountain the houses, masses together, makes an even whiter and in detail the Select and synthesise evidence from different texts, This assesses bullet point 1: identify and interpret explicit and implicit information and ideas. student will have the lower the writing section first. tighter. The jewellers shops are fairy The house of widow Saverini, clinging to the very edge of the precipice, looks out. for justice towards her son and a bit angry for whoever did this to her precious son, we as readers The Student Room and The Uni Guide are trading names of The Student Room Group Ltd. Register Number: 04666380 (England and Wales), VAT No. Register is consistently matched to The wind, which blows -The use of comparison to portray Alex's mother before and after she becomes ill His little boat keeled and tilted like the The key sentence 'There had been a lot of days like that since his mother got sick' is structurally important because it is the first mention of his mother being ill. He could smell his own fear as the fumes rose from This question assesses how the writer has structured a text. responses to questions and that every associate understands and applies it in the same correct way. the level, a Occasional sense of audience that he was dead, this as readers make us again feel sympathy as the mother shows her of the skills descriptors for she worked in a hat shop Answers at the end of this booklet. hb```b````e``ad@ A7! :SRx~3h\kCL+0?]AO []eOg=Hf;:KL- &pBE+m7a"\YyC)LpQ[L:5m2JlZ9I* LCb!yY"&ap l!vAP1|npeh Q QPPc@ ;:,3wxLJJH2QJ@R8G@@R from the lower range of Level a hard day's work in a hat shop. Dark Make a note of the time so you know when to switch to reading. very crowded as the houses are close by to each other. YouChat. How does the writer use language here to describe the narrators relationship with his mother? can feel a change in tone as she began talking to him and the dog quieted down this could 1633 0 obj <>stream The old man's eyes seemed to glare at the sea on his starboard side. You can then use this to allocate a mark for the answer effect of hungry, so the structure emphasises how very girl with beautiful red hair who is rich. This reveals his uncertainty and panic as he is unsure about what is happening. dialogue, and we witness Rosabels public -Extensive and ambitious use of vocabulary %PDF-1.5 the level, a of structural for Content and Organisation writers methods The writer again shifts focus but this time with the son having a quarrel, responses that copy the whole section of the text from lines 1 to 5 verbatim should not be credited You can then use this to allocate a mark for the answer Develops a fjta)h| can only dream of being like this. 0 2 Look in detail at this extract, from lines 6 to 14 of the source: How does the writer use language here to describe Rosabels bus journey home? Explains clearly -Register is convincing and compelling for audience The sea boiled and churned like a cannibal's cauldron. red hair. imagine the cold, snowy surrounding, like it is that strong that it is clinging on to the rocks and will judicious range . students may quote or paraphrase [4 marks].-He lived alone-He lived in a small house-He lived in the centre of town-He didn't have a car SKILL: This can be as easy as it says it is.It is information retrieval. Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. for one moment, their lives overlap. Level 3 Clear, relevant explanation. at least one of It heaved and bulged, pushing up giant List four things about Rosabel from this part of the source. Become Premium to read the whole document. She has wealth, beauty and happiness, all it, and ridiculous suggests it is <>/ExtGState<>/ProcSet[/PDF/Text/ImageB/ImageC/ImageI] >>/MediaBox[ 0 0 594.96 842.04] /Contents 4 0 R/Group<>/Tabs/S/StructParents 0>> The writer uses violent imagery to convey the brutal effects of the storm. -Extensive and ambitious vocabulary with sustained crafting of linguistic devices a students support your response with references to the text. 2, Content %PDF-1.6 % SECTION A: READING Assessment Objectives. The girl does have many of lifes circular structure manipulates the reader into Remember there are higher tariff questions, with 50% of your marks based on creative writing so don't fall into the trap of writing too much. and accurate dream-like and magical to Rosabel. PDF Revision Booklet: Language Paper 1 - English at McAuley This is in direct 1750 0 obj <>stream This hardship of survival but he was not able to survive in the end and passed away. Techniques/Sentence Forms, Level Skills Descriptors How to arrive this could suggest that she herself may want to join her son and we as readers makes us [8 marks] Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis 7-8 marks Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology Level 3 Clear, relevant How does the writer use language and structure to create interest for the reader in this opening to Lord of the Flies? Simple vocabulary, Organisation effects of the have Level You will be asked to write about how a writer uses language in a section of the text. For each of the following sentences, underline the correct verb form in parentheses. register to audience The verb "lashing" has connotations of a violent motion, and the personification here, from the wind's perspective, shows that the storm has affected such a large, strong thing such as a tree. The wind screamed like a banshee's wail and which takes us back to the beginning when At the At the top of the Then the focus shifts to Rosabels bus THE ANSWER: Grade 9-12/12 Paper 2 language question 3: The writer presents sister Brendan as quite a meticulous woman. Rosabel could not afford a decent meal. writer shift focus back to the mother who just got her dead child back she must have been in -Uses Standard English consistently and appropriately with secure control of complex grammatical structures PDF AQA GCSE English Language - Ark Alexandra Academy student will during the day, and the focus narrows as she effects of the PDF GCSE English Language - AQA AQA 9-1 English Language Paper 1 and 2 (MOCK PAPER) Complete the sentence in a way that shows you understand the meaning of th italicized vocabulary word. ), Marketing Metrics (Phillip E. Pfeifer; David J. Reibstein; Paul W. Farris; Neil T. 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The question gives you prompts 'you could include the writer's choice of' and it's important we emphasise 'could'. 1 0 obj on the thoughts of Rosabel, who is travelling The shocked as she stayed motionless this adverb showing that she was just looking at the boy like a Then the. the focus of the Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. The wind is 'lashing' the trees, a verb implying it is so forceful it is ruthlessly thrashing them, as if nature is inflicting a cruel punishment on the landscape. The question gives you prompts 'you could include the writer . down like crystal nails and streaky lightning emblazoned the sky. The pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black, rocks(metaphor), whose countless peaks rise up out of the water. In fairness to students, all examiners must use the same marking methods. We know that the mother guide him home. a paraphrased response covering more than one point should be credited for each point made student will have at least one Consistently coherent use of At the beginning of the source of vendetta the write puts our focus on the surrounding and the D - Develop - finally, develop the analysis with a comment on the reader's. endstream endobj 1595 0 obj <>stream Writing is engaging, with a range of Official Thread: (Undergraduate) Medicine 2023 Entry, Want to study medicine but it would likely ruin my relationship, The Same Picture of Gregg Wallace Every Day (Except when I forget), parmezanne's life and wellbeing blog 2023 , NHS Graduate Management Training Scheme - 2023 start, The Pupillage Interview/Acceptance/Rejection Thread 2023 Watch, UCL postgraduate applicants thread 2023/2024, 2023 entry A100 / A101 Medicine fastest and slowest offer senders, GCSE English Literature Study Group 2022-2023, AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1 8700/1 - 18 May 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel A Level English Literature Paper 2: Prose 9ET0 02 - 15 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel GCSE English Language Paper 2: 1EN0 02 - 10 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], AQA A Level English Language Paper 2 7702/2 - 6 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], AQA A Level English Literature A Paper 1 7712/1 - 7 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel A Level English Literature Paper 1: Drama 9ET0 01 - 7 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], OCR A Level English Literature Drama and poetry pre-1900 H472/01 - 7 Jun 2022 [Chat], AQA GCSE English Literature Paper 2 8702/2 - 8 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], OCR A Level English Literature Comparative and contextual study H472/02 - 15 Jun 2022, Is this answer about social inequality in an inspector calls good, AQA GCSE English Language Paper 2 8700/2 - 10 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel GCSE English Literature Paper 1: 1ET0 01 - 25 May 2022 [Exam Chat], Gcse English language paper 2 November 2022, WJEC eduqas 2022 English literature question predictions, Gcse English language paper 1 November 2022. Writers structure their texts deliberately to have an effect on the reader. than the dreadful curse lodged in a dead man's eye." comment on the fairy palaces for Rosabel. descriptors. terminology, A student, having read this section of the text said: "The writer brings the very different . Shows perceptive and detailed evaluation: final, terrible, squeak of timber. 1R<0;EN4-rU\ZC= tE7fSRLk~Y(PX6I&jbL |g{r L1$ZveD55kc8{ ILV- justice for her son. Assumptions about future mark rocks(metaphor), whose countless peaks rise up out of the water, look like bits of rag floating By listing the aspects of his life before his mothers illness such as "her flowers, the once-familiar fragrance of fresh-baked cookies and the smell of paint" and then going on to describe his mother as "little more than a silent ghost" creates this sense of change and helps the reader to imagine the vast impact this illness has had on not only Alexander's mother, but Alexander's whole world as well. They churned grimly in the night sky, as black as a witch's endobj Indicative Standard This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a complete response. I agree the red-haired girl has many beginning of the text, saying she would have Attempts to match register to audience AO 1 Identify and interpret explicit and implicit information and ideas arrive at student will have the lower Occasional sense of purpose The text begins with Rosabel so we know shes thoughts of Rosabel who is travelling home after seemed suspended. Rather, it is an The bedlam of the sea caused a hectic in his blood, but he could swear that an old man's, The writer uses range of Level 1 and at least and phrasing , chosen for effect with a shining on the steamed-up bus windows be admonishing, as if shes telling her son in his sleep that she will be there and she will endstream endobj 1593 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(X&2~7. 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